Some pics of the rough sketches

These pics are VERY rough. Most of the pictures you can't even tell what's going on. I had some rough dialog on the pages, but I took that out. Mainly because I took the story in a slightly different direction. I could use pretty much the same panel art, just have them say some different things. Another thing is that some of the rough sketch panels on these pages, have been removed, replaced, or moved around. Typical editing. Like I've said, this was just rough concept and layout design. The characters probably won't even look anything like they do here.

Okay, so that's page 1-5. A little tidbit for ya... its now page 3-5.